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Rosebud Heart
It is Fall, your petals fall like feathers to the ground
Slowly, down, down, down
Once beautiful, bright, and blooming in full,
Begin to change shades, dying daily, looking dull
Once kept alive by the one who pruned you,
Being alone is not what you are used to
So lively before, but now you seem changed
Something is different about you, rearranged.
I see your suffering, lacking tender touch
Such a beautiful thing now ruined and crushed.
Your thorns cut deep, keeping people away,
Yet your soft petals dry out more each day.
It is Winter, the air feels cold and dim
Damaged and alone you rest, looking grim
Hurt left you helpless, withered and closed
The deepest, dark pieces of your heart exposed
I know you will soon bloom again
But wait patiently for you to mend
With the changing season and new year
Soon a bud promises to appear
Do not lose faith my fragile friend
Your time will come. This is not the end.
It is Spring, and your condition improves,
In the air, your gentle petals move.
This timely season gives you a fresh start,
The regeneration of a new heart.
Your petals grow bigger, beginning to swell,
A sign you moved on, you recovered well.
It is a slow process, coping with pain
Let your thirst be quenched by the rain
It is summer, you are alone no longer
This cycle of life only made you stronger
The sun shines brightly, reflecting off you,
A new creation that soaks up the dew
You bloom fully again, leaving behind the past
Fulfilling your purpose in the world at last
So intricately designed to bring beauty to those
Who appreciate you for being a rose
Your delicate nature caused you to fall apart
But you blossomed again, just like my heart.
Danella I love this poem it's really really good! And the summer part works really well too so it's good you put that in :)
ReplyDelete--Brittany (the roomie..idk if you know any other brittanys haha)
Thanks so much roomie! I appreciate that you read it and for the positive feedback. There will be more to come.
ReplyDelete**Christina***
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh Danella this is excellent!! I absolutely love how it flows so well with the sequence of seasons. Incredible! Keep it up! :)